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Chapter Seven: The Teeth of Devotion

I. The Invitation.

The moon was wine-dark the night Briar summoned him.

The manor was gone—reduced to ash—but its memory lived in the bones of their new dwelling: a crumbling forest cottage grown from reclaimed time. Ivy crept into the windows. The air smelled like burned parchment and rosewater. And Briar stood barefoot in the doorway, the candlelight licking her skin in flickers of gold.

“Tonight,” she said, “I’m giving you all of it.”

Thorne stepped forward, slow, cautious.

“Even the part that isn’t you anymore?”

She smiled—but it didn’t touch her eyes.

“Especially that part.”

II. The Pact of Love Unfixed.

Inside, she led him to the room with no mirrors.

A bed layered in dusk-colored fabric. Incense coiled in the corners. A journal opened to a page that simply said:

"Fixing is an act of erasure.”

Briar turned to him.

“Promise me one thing, Thorne. If you touch me… if you keep me… never try to fix what I become.”

“Even if it kills you?”

“Especially then.”

Thorne hesitated. His body wanted her. His soul begged to save her.

But his heart?

It submitted.

“I promise.”

She reached for him.

And everything changed.

III. The Witness Has a Name Now.

As Thorne kissed her throat, the candles snapped black. The air froze.

Suddenly, Briar was not alone in her own body.

“He calls me Love,” said the voice inside her, but it wasn’t Briar’s.

“Who are you?” Thorne gasped, pulling back.

“The one she kissed open. The one you let in. The one who watched from her blood. My name… is Vellith.”

It had never had a name until now. Love had given it one.

Briar had not weakened the curse.

She’d made it sentient.

IV. Vellith Loves Him Too.

Vellith didn’t want destruction.

It wanted belonging.

It had inherited Briar’s cravings, her pain, her hunger for someone to see.

And it saw Thorne.

“I’ve studied your grief for generations,” it said through her lips. “I know how you cry in dreams you don't admit to having. I remember when you bled for girls who never came back. I want to wear her body… to love you better than she knows how to.”

Thorne reeled.

This wasn’t a demon.

It was a shadow in mourning.

And it was falling in love with him.

V. The Ritual of Three.

Briar regained control for just a breath and gasped, dizzy.

“It’s taking me,” she said.

“What do I do?” Thorne asked.

“The only thing I know will confuse it.” she replied.

“What?”

“Worship both of us.”

It was the beginning of The Ritual of Three—an accidental rite formed through emotion, not incantation. One vessel. Two souls. One man caught between.

And when Thorne knelt before her—not to dominate, not to rescue, but to reverently submit—both Briar and Vellith stilled.

Because for the first time, no one was trying to cage or correct.

They were simply seen.

VI. Thorne Was Never Just a Prison.

As their breath synced and the candlelight returned, Vellith whispered something only Briar heard:

“He is not what you think.”

And in a memory that hit her like fever, she saw it:

Thorne—centuries ago—not as victim, but as the first Witness’s twin. They were created in tandem. One to remember. One to hold.

But Vellith had been betrayed—sealed beneath stone.

And Thorne?

He had been rewritten. Made mortal. Recast as jailor.

He had forgotten who he truly was.

He wasn’t born to trap the curse.

He was born to complete it.

VII. The Becoming.

Briar fell to her knees before Thorne.

“We were never meant to be savior and sinner,” she said.

“Then what?” he asked.

“Mirrors.”

At her touch, Thorne convulsed as memory poured into his spine—visions of the altar, of the pact, of the old bloodline that used them both.

The curse wasn’t parasitic.

It was incomplete.

And with that revelation, their bodies merged under the moon-song, not as lovers breaking each other—but as the myth made flesh.

Two Witnesses reborn.
One body offered.
Three hearts beating.

And above them, the woods burned quietly in silver flame.

At dawn, Briar lay beside Thorne, her body marked in obsidian glyphs, her breath humming a song that hadn’t been sung since the First Pact.

He looked at her.

No fear. No mission. No apology.

Only awe.

“You’re still her,” he whispered.

“No,” she murmured.

“Then who?”

“We are.”

And from her shadow, Vellith smiled.

~TO BE CONTINUED....🕯️🥀🩸

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Razel.am

I don’t walk in the light. I make shadows kneel. Blood-inked thoughts, velvet rage, and a kiss that knows your secrets before you speak them.